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> The Coming of the Storm, A conceit made by me for school
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post Sep 29 2007, 02:04 PM
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The Coming of the Storm

A storm is coming in the night
You can hear it rumbling in the air
The iron weights fall from the sky
They can’t be out run
A pillar of fire forms to my right
As the minis scream over head
Their red glare lights up the dead
The sky lights up in the distance
As the false sun arises to the west
The shockwave silences the night
Then the black snow falls
All through the fight
You awake at the morning light
And there is nothing left in sight


tell me what you think and see if you can spot the comparisons


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post Oct 1 2007, 05:42 AM
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Hmm... Who got nuked?


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post Oct 1 2007, 06:44 PM
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anyone you want wink1.gif how ever I was thinking a soviet versus NATO war


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post Oct 1 2007, 08:13 PM
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Well, at that time it was Warsaw Pact vs. NATO wink1.gif


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post Oct 4 2007, 03:11 AM
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Methinks Enola Gay assraping japan.


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post Oct 4 2007, 07:55 PM
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QUOTE (daTSchikinhed @ Oct 3 2007, 11:11 PM) *
Methinks Enola Gay assraping japan.

Dont you think thats a bit....Racist unsure.gif


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post Oct 4 2007, 10:00 PM
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Japanese isn't a race, it's a nationality

I was going to say the Enola Gay nuking Hiroshima or Nagasaki, but those happened during daylight so...


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post Oct 5 2007, 06:35 AM
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The nightime bombing runs on Tokyo/London/Berlin/Paris in WWII?

I dunno, I"m just pumping crap out now.


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post Oct 5 2007, 12:17 PM
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QUOTE (BlackieChan @ Oct 4 2007, 06:00 PM) *
Japanese isn't a race, it's a nationality

I was going to say the Enola Gay nuking Hiroshima or Nagasaki, but those happened during daylight so...

O well you get the point unsure.gif


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post Oct 5 2007, 12:22 PM
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Aye.. Me thinks this be racism. Yaarrgg. unsure.gif


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post Oct 5 2007, 06:50 PM
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there is no racism in the conceit btw. many of you have been very close on the main comparison and I did mention a nuke in there.


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post Apr 6 2008, 02:14 AM
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why was this never moved to creative writing? and this is still open for comments


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This is my first time seeing this unsure.gif


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post Jan 23 2009, 02:26 AM
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post Jan 23 2009, 04:31 AM
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This is my first time seeing this

I thought so for myself too, until I saw that I already posted lol.gif

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