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Kurorahk
post Sep 1 2007, 06:59 AM
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This is a Nod Bomber that was made to counter act GDIs capablities of knocking out the Banshee Bomber before it could do its job or kill it on its return home. This bomber is a good canadite for use as a New bomber that is stealthed or not you guys get to deside that, or you could use it as a Nod Airstrike superpower. I have included the unit production icon and also if you want it a version for use as a Superweapon. Ingame Screenshots will come later.

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post Sep 1 2007, 08:22 AM
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hmmm, its nice but the wing is too big, anyway i like this voxels. wink1.gif


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post Sep 1 2007, 07:47 PM
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agree, the wings are to simple. add some detail like some holes so they look like 2 wings put together, or some stringers, or turbines.
if you don't like any of these ideas, how about a big nod-logo?


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post Sep 2 2007, 05:27 AM
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Take example of the TW Vertigo to at least make it look decent...
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post Sep 2 2007, 10:58 AM
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What's up with you and Kurorahk's aircraft? All you do is say you don't like them and give no actual constructive critizism. Oh and i think it is decent but not the best. I have to agree that the wings look too long and too flat, 2 ways to fix that, leave it as it is and make the nose larger and the wings thicker near the body and thinner from the end, or make the wings smaller and add something on them, like rockets etc. Other than that theres nothing actually wrong with it.

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post Sep 2 2007, 11:51 AM
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QUOTE (eXit @ Sep 2 2007, 01:58 PM) *
What's up with you and Kurorahk's aircraft? All you do is say you don't like them and give no actual constructive critizism. Oh and i think it is decent but not the best. I have to agree that the wings look too long and too flat, 2 ways to fix that, leave it as it is and make the nose larger and the wings thicker near the body and thinner from the end, or make the wings smaller and add something on them, like rockets etc. Other than that theres nothing actually wrong with it.


People before me had said what I was going to say, so why repeat their message? I only said that he should take example from the TW Vertigo to make it better. Here's few things he should do too:

1. The wings need to be more round on the front, top, and maybe under. Add some more detail to them, and wtf are those red tails behind them?

2. The cockpit sticks out too much, you can try to "blend in" it by adding darker/lighter colors the line that separates it from the rest of the body.

3. The tail isn't normalized correctly.

4. Overall it lacks detail. But don't add it too much.
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post Sep 2 2007, 10:38 PM
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You should know what those red "things" are at the back, afterall you were the one saying he should learn from the TW bomber, they are anti-aircraft turrets.

Sorry to Kurorahk for these posts.

Btw, i agree with WorManiac about the cockpit.
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post Sep 2 2007, 11:12 PM
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not bad but the fuselage needs to be raised up then rounded.


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post Sep 3 2007, 02:50 PM
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QUOTE (eXit @ Sep 3 2007, 01:38 AM) *
You should know what those red "things" are at the back, afterall you were the one saying he should learn from the TW bomber, they are anti-aircraft turrets.

Sorry to Kurorahk for these posts.

Btw, i agree with WorManiac about the cockpit.


I'm sorry, but they don't look like guns that spit out bullets. I thought those things were in the front in TW (Btw, I own TW, I haven't played it for a while though).
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post Sep 3 2007, 05:39 PM
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It is a tailgunner like WWII bombers...

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post Sep 4 2007, 09:16 PM
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It's a nice voxel indeed. But take a close look at the picture Carnotaurus posted, the wing shape is quite different as is the colouring.


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post Sep 5 2007, 12:50 AM
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Is that supposed to be camouflage on the top of the wings?


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