QUOTE (eXit @ Sep 2 2007, 01:58 PM)
What's up with you and Kurorahk's aircraft? All you do is say you don't like them and give no actual constructive critizism. Oh and i think it is decent but not the best. I have to agree that the wings look too long and too flat, 2 ways to fix that, leave it as it is and make the nose larger and the wings thicker near the body and thinner from the end, or make the wings smaller and add something on them, like rockets etc. Other than that theres nothing actually wrong with it.
People before me had said what I was going to say, so why repeat their message? I only said that he should take example from the TW Vertigo to make it better. Here's few things he should do too:
1. The wings need to be more round on the front, top, and maybe under. Add some more detail to them, and wtf are those red tails behind them?
2. The cockpit sticks out too much, you can try to "blend in" it by adding darker/lighter colors the line that separates it from the rest of the body.
3. The tail isn't normalized correctly.
4. Overall it lacks detail. But don't add it too much.