its pretty good for a first try.
However i have one thing about it. I think your name should appear more towards the end of the sequence and possibly (if you can learn how to soon) fade in instead of having your name shown the entire time. I just think that having the name there the entire time that big in the center of the thing kinda ruins the little movie sequence. Though if you made your name smaller and in one of the corners it might not seem as disrupting and people could still see who's it is.
oh and also.......your name on it is off centered
just thought id point it out.