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[daTSchikinhed]

Give it all up
Written by Anthony Myers (daTSchikinhed)
To be Performed by Pyrocity


[Piano/acoustic intro (overlaid classical)]

The days fly by in a blur of confusion
I ask them to stop but they keep refusing
I’m getting lost in the timeline of this
I’d rid everything just for that one kiss
My life is a shattered pile of nothing
Out of everything I’m becoming
I look into you eyes and see myself
The sound of your voice is my help
Steadily pulling me ever higher
You are all that my heart desires!
Forever crying…

I’d give it all up for you
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do
To repay the love you’ve given
Your love is one worth reliving
I’d give up all I do.
I’d give it all for up you.

I’m slowly recovering from this fall
I’ve hit the floor and I’ve lost it all
I’m looking at you and you’re picking me up
I’m holding you in my arms, forever my love
The world is at the mercy of the loss
Destiny leads our paths to cross
Forever crying…

I’d give it all up for you
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do
To repay the love you’ve given
Your love is one worth reliving
I’d give up all I do.
(I do)

[guitar solo]

I’d give it all for up you.
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do
To repay the love you’ve given
Your love is one worth reliving
I’d give up all I do.
I’d give up all I do.
I’d give it all up for you
All for you…

This post has been edited by daTSchikinhed: Jan 20 2008, 06:12 AM

[Crimsonum]

Notes?