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> my new map: snowy settlement (4), a new map ive decided to work on
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post Feb 1 2007, 06:36 PM
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okay ive started making my first ever snow map smile.gif even though they are hard to make but im still giving it a go :biggrin:


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post Feb 1 2007, 06:08 PM
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The cliffs looks a bit straight
And there is not much to see...


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post Feb 1 2007, 06:50 PM
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yes like CrashKing said the cliffs look to straight

post some screens then ill say more

EDIT:from the screens:

-Cliffs look to blocky
-Cliff errors
-err i am to lazy to look closer on the pictures......

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post Feb 1 2007, 07:12 PM
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Well, The cliffs look like all the same...
Make some cliffs big and long, some small.
The cliffs are blocky.
You should make them more .... Wierd shaped

TORE: One of the hills looks like a cliff error, but I don't think it is


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post Feb 1 2007, 07:18 PM
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Some slopes are a bit blocky. And try to use more cliffs.
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post Feb 3 2007, 09:51 AM
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i got rid of some slopes like you said what do you think now (will do more cliffs later)

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post Feb 3 2007, 10:32 AM
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looks good but still need more work.


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post Feb 3 2007, 03:26 PM
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You need to use a bit more slopes. And the cliffs that surround the blue tiberium are too straight!
Keep working on it, and it might become a nice map.
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post Feb 3 2007, 04:11 PM
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i have a suggestion for something you could see that might help you out some.

go into the spotlighted map section and find my map FrozenFate or find Yukon Pass (both spotlighted at PPM) and look at those. they are very according to lots very nice snow maps that give good detail and have pretty nice layouts.

you are improving so keep on working. but you still need to get a lot of work in.


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post Feb 4 2007, 06:58 PM
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Change the lightning!


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post Feb 4 2007, 07:23 PM
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Gufu you epileptic bum those pics were taken in finalsun meaning the lighting isnt present.

sorry i just had to call someone a bum tongue.gif

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