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post Nov 24 2007, 05:49 AM
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Here you go... This'll (Hopefully) make you all forgive me. innocent.gif

This is: Intoxication (2-6 Players) Made By: Aro.

Size - Large (125 x 125)
Players - 6
Tiberium ammount - Very Large
Urban Areas - Small
Water - Large
Area Type - Lake / River / Mountainous / Mutated
Warfare - Ground

Map Story - This land, was once home to many people, it always had visitors and was well known for its wonderful nature and wild-life... Approximatly 6 years when the town of Owens was built, there became alot of criminal activity... There where murders, robberies and alot more... With lack of authority, the town was closed, but some people where left behind in the evactuation, resulting in them being mutated with all the tiberium life growing after time... The residents could not be saved, and the land was declared unsafe, due-to ion storms, so no planes can get into the area, and it was unsafe for the ferries to drop of tourist's anymore... The land has became a Red zone, and there appear to be plans for this land to be cleaned up in the future.













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post Nov 24 2007, 07:40 AM
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Looks awesome. I'll have to play it later thumbup.gif

Also, how did you get unbanned? Time has worn off the hatred me thinks. I think all the evidence of Aro's hate spam should be deleted to stop further discussion of hate.


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post Nov 24 2007, 12:06 PM
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I forgave you 5 months ago! biggrin.gif

The map looks great as always! *downloads*


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post Nov 24 2007, 12:19 PM
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Aye. Though I'd make the entrances to the upper three bases a bit less wide, as to make things fair.

With that minor adjustment, I say a spotlight for the emo kid is in place.


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post Nov 24 2007, 04:53 PM
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just as I said at PPM

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Lighting: 8/10 The lighting was good and wasn't too dark ingame. However, I think it could have used more...The VHMs probably could have been lit up and I think you could have done more with a city/village lighting which comes in to play with other stuff...see below..

Cliffwork: 8/10 Again nice cliff work...however it seemed kinda open to me still and personally i think you could have done better with your cliff ramps. Most of them were just straight from one cliff ramp part to the other.

Layout/concept: 8.5/10 This was nice...I really liked the deserted town in the middle however I think that it could have had some parking lots for those buildings. Also I think the 3VHM spots are possibly imbalanced as they seem closer to some players than others.... Another thing you could have done was instead of having those tiberium fields in the middle between each player is that you could have had a smaller town that wasn't deserted there with nice town lighting and then had your extra tib trees in the areas of the VHMs.

Triggers: 6/10 well there was only one...and it was an ion storm. Which IMO happened too soon/often and was kinda silly since it only lasted like 30 seconds if that...

Game play: 7/10 Gameplay was ok however the AI wasn't all that tough and would only come from one side...the side it was closest to. Also I had to send a pretty good attack on their harvesters and base before they attacked me.

Overall: 7.5 Almost worth a spotlight vote from me. Just more needs to be done with the map IMO.
Keep up the good work Aro.


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post Nov 24 2007, 06:44 PM
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The map looks really good. I must play it tomorrow.. And give a review.

BTW, could you post .jpgs instead of .pngs? It takes years to load these pictures.


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post Nov 24 2007, 06:53 PM
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QUOTE (^Rampastein @ Nov 24 2007, 01:44 PM) *
BTW, could you post .jpgs instead of .pngs? It takes years to load these pictures.


its not that the pics are PNG its the fact that they are uploaded to ImageShack which has been really slow for like the last 7months on showing pics when viewing a topic. lol

Aro just take the time to upload them to the site. Much better in the long run then. tongue.gif


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post Nov 24 2007, 07:48 PM
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Get photobucket Aro! It's a lot better. Only n00bs use imageshack tongue.gif

Now, I'll get back with comments soon, I just gotta get TS installed smile.gif


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post Nov 24 2007, 07:59 PM
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Hang on, intoxication is a disturbed song...i'm guessing the residents on this map are down with the sickness then? (ha ha)

Looks like a good map, if I had firestorm i'd give it a download, alas I do not.

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post Nov 24 2007, 11:33 PM
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Yes! Congratulations, first person to finaly realise it's a Disturbed song. tongue.gif
"Now that you are inside, Intoxication!" matrix.gif
Oh and CrashKing, i don't use photobucket, becasue i always delete sh*t from the albums and forget about where they're posted etc.

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post Nov 24 2007, 11:38 PM
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uhmm....why not attach them? blink.gif


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I'll do that, for future reference. matrix.gif


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post Nov 25 2007, 11:30 AM
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Here's another review for ya.

Detail: Some of your slopes were straight, but otherwise you score high. 9\10

Lighting: Well, it's nice, but the green lighting is quite too intense. And it needs more aswell. 7.5\10

Layout: Hmm, it's better than your snow map, but as Ixith said, it's a bit open for my preference. But that's only my preferrence. 8\10

Gameplay: Well, it does have lots of mutations on it. And it has veins. 7\10

Overall: Big map! But I think it's not enough to spotlight yet. It just needs a bit more spice to gameplay. And a bit better lighting to it.
Then I'll say spotlight for this one... 8\10


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post Nov 25 2007, 11:56 AM
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You say that about every map, CrashKing. Do you even know what you mean yourself when you say "Spice Up"?. huh.gif Thanks for the full review, but it's not enough to help me improve. What I need, and what everyone else need's in reviews, is Constructive Criticism and suggestions on how to make things look better and how to improve on mistakes, etc.
Normaly when it comes to "Spicing Up" a map, it's detailing, not just trigger's y'know. There was a story to go with this map, and it is written above, that's why there are no moving vehicles and there is only an Ion Storm. In future, when you say "Spice Up" a map, give examples yeah? smile.gif

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post Nov 25 2007, 12:19 PM
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He means put some spice at the map! tongue.gif XD

"He who controls Dune controls the spice, he who controls the spice, controls the universe..." (<- Its a long time since I played Dune....)

I will get straight to it....spotlight! biggrin.gif

It was wherry fun to play! Some slopes are blocky, but it is a large map!

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...Right! huh.gif
LOL! Cheers, Tore! biggrin.gif


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Well, basically.. Spice is what you put on food, and it makes it taste a lot better!

I mean that the gameplay could use some exciting stuff to it. Something that makes it more fun to play. Get what I mean? Like if you add a cliff in the middle of the map with tiberium, both will try to get that tiberium first. Or having triggers send meteors at certain spots when you go there. That's spice in my opinion. The triggers are fine, but you need something more gameplay wise to be honest. Better?

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post Nov 25 2007, 09:18 PM
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Yes! Much better, cause now I actualy understand you. However, i don't think it matters as much. Salibian desert never had alot of triggers etc. and I personaly think that came out pretty well. tongue.gif


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Well yeah. I've started thinking of making more interesting maps with a nice gameplay to them, that's why I'm so hard on it tongue.gif


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post Nov 30 2007, 11:12 AM
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Right i've uploaded a new version. The entrance to the top bases are shrunk, as z suggested. And i've made some ajustments to the lighting too.
No extra triggers cause there are no more for me to do that go with the maps storyline. I'll put metorshowers in.. Maybe.


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updated the map pack. And.. spotlighted smile.gif


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Cheers! biggrin.gif

Spotlight number 3 for, Aro! tongue.gif


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