IPB

Welcome Guest ( Log In | Register )


 
Reply to this topicStart new topic
> Story
Gothic Gregg
post Oct 23 2006, 07:01 PM
Post #1


Disc Thrower
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 90
Joined: 21-October 06
From: Sitting On The Green :),Newcastle,England
Member No.: 73
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberium Wars



Heres some more of that story I promised. It will be continued.

I stood up, realising that the blood was coming from a GDI swine. His face was mangled, probobly by a cyborg. I looked round, or commaders must have advanced the battle. I stood for a good half hour. I had lost my friends, my family were turned to Tiberium mutants and I had been left here by my own men. I jogged towards a small laser turret. It was dead. I pulled the battery pack out. I don't know why I did this. I pulled out my M16 and fired three rounds into it. It still wouldn't fall. I walked away, sad and defeated. I then saw a Buggy, yes a Recon Buggy. I shouted and shot the air, they started to turn towards me. I realised it had a recently painted GDI logo on the side. I stood still. And then for a split second death seemed, almost... beautiful. It was better than been dragged away to some NOD camp, forcd to do regimes every day. And Kane, what a bastard. Then my sence got the better of me, I ran towards an abandoned building, falling through the door. I ran upsatairs and waited. I heard an engine pull up and I held my breath.....
I stayed still for several minutes. I heard a gun shot and then a "clump". A tricle of blood rolled into the boxes I was hid in. I waited for my cetain death, but none arrived. I waited and waited until I heard the engine pull away. I stood up and looked at the body. It was female.... And she had a sniper rifle over her back. I wondered who she was. I was interupted as I heard a zap. I ran up the stairs with that rifle and looked out the window. The buggy was been attacked by a Tiberium Floater. I couldn't diecide weather to shoot it or not. They were helpless. But they had murdered an innocent women. I aimed the sniper rifle over the floater and pulled the trigger...
I looked at the floater, it was falling to the ground. I had deafeated it. I looked at the GDI swines and saw them looking around for the saviour. I ducked down and looked at the rifle. It was loaded with explosives rounds. I headed downstairs, only to see the body moved. The body had moved over. I shook her, but there was no movement and no pulse. I slung her over my shoudler and jogged outside. I stopped near a civilian pick-up. I got in with the women in the back. It was low on fuel, but I could probobly siphon some fuel from that buggy. I drove over and pulled out my pistol, firing off a few shots into the ground. I rolled out, and put the pistol to one of the marines heads. They dropped their weapons and stepped aside. I looked in the trunk for a fuel canister, but I found something a lot different....
Skulls. Human skulls, some with flesh still left on. I felt quesy, and looked at the marines. "What the hell is wrong with you?" I demanded to know. The marines stood their with little sign of uncomfort on their faces. I suddenly threw up the contents of my stomach, and one of the marines, seeing this as a chance to strike, grabbed my gun, and hit my with the butt. I fell to the ground, and rolled over a few times. I struggled to get up to see the barrle of a pistol pnted at me. "Whoh, easy!" I said, hoping not to be killed. He put the shiny pistol in his belt and reached down his hand as if to help me. I grabbed his wrist and he pulled me up. I asked who he was. "We are the Suffering Vengance......




!!!!WARNING!!!!! Suffering Vengacne is took by me for my mod. Allthough it is a rubbish name you may not take it without my explicit saidso.

This post has been edited by Gothic Gregg: Nov 2 2006, 05:06 PM


--------------------
www.freewebs.com/silent_springs

My mod site. For RA2

Don't worry I'm still making one for all the CnC games xD

Other mods im making:
Gothic Mod (CnC3)
Rolling on side pizza like the one of Lego Land mod xD


Current Games I'm Completing:

Tomb Raiders
KKnD
The Thing

IPB Image


Thx to Huntmen for the sig. xD Makes me feel 11 again XD XD
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
ChielScape
post Oct 23 2006, 07:33 PM
Post #2


SSM Launcher
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 799
Joined: 21-October 06
From: In ur BIOS, steeln ur Megahurtz!
Member No.: 33
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberian Sun



not bad, really short


--------------------
Admin Note: Please refer to signature rules.
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Gothic Gregg
post Oct 23 2006, 07:36 PM
Post #3


Disc Thrower
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 90
Joined: 21-October 06
From: Sitting On The Green :),Newcastle,England
Member No.: 73
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberium Wars



yer, There meant to be quick 5min readers, and there all linked together in one big long chain xD


--------------------
www.freewebs.com/silent_springs

My mod site. For RA2

Don't worry I'm still making one for all the CnC games xD

Other mods im making:
Gothic Mod (CnC3)
Rolling on side pizza like the one of Lego Land mod xD


Current Games I'm Completing:

Tomb Raiders
KKnD
The Thing

IPB Image


Thx to Huntmen for the sig. xD Makes me feel 11 again XD XD
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
The DvD
post Oct 23 2006, 09:09 PM
Post #4


Webmaster
Group Icon

Group: Root Admin
Posts: 740
Joined: 27-May 06
From: The Netherlands
Member No.: 2
Alliance: Nod
Favorite game: Tiberian Sun



Couldn't you have replied to your original post, or have edited it? If evey paragraph will have it's own topic it would get pretty confusing don't you think? smile.gif


--------------------
Please contact me on msn if you need me for anything, thanks.
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Gothic Gregg
post Oct 24 2006, 09:49 AM
Post #5


Disc Thrower
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 90
Joined: 21-October 06
From: Sitting On The Green :),Newcastle,England
Member No.: 73
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberium Wars



I was going to but the crap fourms was *gone* so I couldnt, and this is going to be the new story paragraph anyway.
Well, sorry for the confusion :(


Edit:Read the story its been updated.

This post has been edited by Gothic Gregg: Oct 28 2006, 04:41 PM


--------------------
www.freewebs.com/silent_springs

My mod site. For RA2

Don't worry I'm still making one for all the CnC games xD

Other mods im making:
Gothic Mod (CnC3)
Rolling on side pizza like the one of Lego Land mod xD


Current Games I'm Completing:

Tomb Raiders
KKnD
The Thing

IPB Image


Thx to Huntmen for the sig. xD Makes me feel 11 again XD XD
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Gothic Gregg
post Oct 28 2006, 04:42 PM
Post #6


Disc Thrower
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 90
Joined: 21-October 06
From: Sitting On The Green :),Newcastle,England
Member No.: 73
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberium Wars



Sorry about the DP, but otherwise it woun't bump to the top.


--------------------
www.freewebs.com/silent_springs

My mod site. For RA2

Don't worry I'm still making one for all the CnC games xD

Other mods im making:
Gothic Mod (CnC3)
Rolling on side pizza like the one of Lego Land mod xD


Current Games I'm Completing:

Tomb Raiders
KKnD
The Thing

IPB Image


Thx to Huntmen for the sig. xD Makes me feel 11 again XD XD
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Nimron
post Oct 28 2006, 05:00 PM
Post #7


Hum-vee
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 185
Joined: 21-October 06
From: UK
Member No.: 48
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberian Sun



What was in the trunk?

And a good read there, but could be improved a little with verbs and such! wink1.gif
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Genobee
post Oct 28 2006, 07:34 PM
Post #8


Flamethrower Infantry
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 128
Joined: 21-October 06
From: This lousy chair near my computer.
Member No.: 66
Alliance: Scrin
Favorite game: Tiberian Sun



Too long , didn't read. Really , i read what i wan't to.


--------------------

<--You don't want the dragons to die!
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Gothic Gregg
post Nov 2 2006, 05:07 PM
Post #9


Disc Thrower
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 90
Joined: 21-October 06
From: Sitting On The Green :),Newcastle,England
Member No.: 73
Alliance: GDI
Favorite game: Tiberium Wars



Yer, if oyu don't watnt to read it then thats ok.

More of the story added.
Sorry to spoil it but


!!!!WARNING!!!!! Suffering Vengacne is took by me for my mod. Allthough it ou may not take it without my explicit saidso.


--------------------
www.freewebs.com/silent_springs

My mod site. For RA2

Don't worry I'm still making one for all the CnC games xD

Other mods im making:
Gothic Mod (CnC3)
Rolling on side pizza like the one of Lego Land mod xD


Current Games I'm Completing:

Tomb Raiders
KKnD
The Thing

IPB Image


Thx to Huntmen for the sig. xD Makes me feel 11 again XD XD
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post
Dog Of War
post Nov 3 2006, 11:52 AM
Post #10


Rocket Infantry
Group Icon

Group: Members
Posts: 44
Joined: 28-October 06
From: Scotland
Member No.: 179
Favorite game: Tiberian Sun



Nice biggrin.gif I'm looking forward to see what happens next


--------------------
グレイ・フォックス

BTC
Go to the top of the page
 
: | +Quote Post

Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

 

Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 3rd July 2025 - 04:35 PM


XGhozt.com