FS Final Battle of Ypres (2-3) 2.0, Having some problems Options

[KingByng]

Ok the more I look at my first completed map, the more I realize that it sucks so much that even a pirate would touch it with a ten foot pole (Thats when the ninjas would attack, when the pirates are distracted ). So last week I decided to do a little remake the map. Among various other things, I put in a train. I followed the tutorial to the letter (with the exception of having a bigger train, 10 cars total instead of 4). The problem I am having is that the train goes through the loop once without stopping when its not supposed to (there should be 1 stop), then reaching a certain point, where it freezes. Any suggestions?

P.S. I'm a bit rushed, so I'll post the new map in a bit. Stay tuned.

EDIT: Turns out I'm not going anywhere. Here's the map:

EDIT 4: Map has been released, check out the thread in Finished Map subforum.

Note that it is far from being done.

P.S. For full understanding of the ninja-pirate stuff, reference the pirate vs. ninja thread.

EDIT 2: Here is a link to version 1, if anyone is interested.

EDIT 3: Also, any comments on the map itself as it stands in the download would be appreciated as well

This post has been edited by Cross: Jul 10 2008, 02:02 AM

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[Crash]

Well, I gotta agree with Ixith.. Upload screenshots next time aswell. I think the cliffies do need work, they're a bit repeated and straight at some points, try to have a rule of not repeating the same cliff angle more than three times.. that works.. and never use the same cliff after one.. you did that some places too. The city is ok, and the layout is too... but I think you should drop having the huge slope elevation from water, it looks un-netrual, especially when it is not smooth. The slope set in the northeast isn't correctly added.. The swampy stuff won't lat because it's added wrong. You definitely need more detail, and you need more smooth and round slopes, not blocky. I'm not sure about the lighting since I don't have any screens, i'm too lazy to go ingame. Also you need to add a water shore cliff from water cliffs to end a shore, and then start the just water cliffs again.. The pavement around the old bases is far to blocky.. If you correct these things your map is probably some good stuff! To be honest I think you have been lazy.. take your time, don't rush.. Good luck!

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