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post Sep 25 2007, 01:39 AM
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hey uh, where did the roleplay go?

Just like roleplay MKI, there's become a lot of chaos and disorientation in the roleplay.
It was bound to happen, I just want to put it back on track before it gets too far.
I've set it under 'hidden', since I can't edit posts while the topic is closed. So it's really still there, even though you can't see it (Corsair, you can still see it right?)

I'm doing some hardcore editing on it, on spelling & grammar, removing the ion storm, making the characters a little more believable & less overpowered, and rewording some sections to make more sense to the reader.
TBA some entries were so grammatically bad that I didn't even take the time to read them at first. That's a big NO for us as writers: what's the point of spending the time writing, if all our readers are scared away by run ons and, bad speling, and, too many comas, and cant none even, now wat the frik the stories abut.

I know not everyone has English as a first language, but the rule holds true if you know you're going to bomb the story, please don't write.
Reading it can be just as entertaining

I know a lot of people are putting a lot of time and effort into this RP - if no one reads our roleplay because it's filled with bad writing and a boring story, then all that work has gone to waste. I'm doing what I can to edit out the garbage, so that none of the good work goes to waste pokey.gif


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post Oct 5 2007, 07:07 PM
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- Team Black   Roleplay under construction   Sep 25 2007, 01:39 AM
- - Lightstorm   I'm hoping you don't twist the storyline t...   Sep 25 2007, 01:50 AM
- - Vintriaz   QUOTE I made the topic 'invisible' so I ca...   Sep 25 2007, 02:04 AM
- - Corsair   QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 24 2007, 09:39 PM...   Sep 25 2007, 04:15 AM
- - Nod Strike   QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 25 2007, 02:39 AM...   Sep 25 2007, 03:03 PM
- - Nintyuk   aww come on, my charachter was really starting to ...   Sep 25 2007, 05:07 PM
- - Lightstorm   firefox has a spell checker.   Sep 25 2007, 08:21 PM
|- - Nintyuk   QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Sep 25 2007, 09:21 PM...   Sep 25 2007, 08:35 PM
- - Team Black   I'm going to fix your spelling and grammar thi...   Sep 25 2007, 11:13 PM
- - Vintriaz   [Tasteless Comment Removed] I should know better ...   Sep 26 2007, 01:18 AM
- - Lightstorm   just in response to Vintz the fleet isn't what...   Sep 26 2007, 01:47 AM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Sep 25 2007, 09:47 PM...   Sep 26 2007, 02:07 AM
- - Vintriaz   only five? hmm... I was under the ussumption that ...   Sep 26 2007, 02:58 AM
- - Team Black   Vintriaz, I don't know what you hope to accomp...   Sep 26 2007, 03:00 AM
- - Vintriaz   *sigh* My apologies Team black I'm just loosin...   Sep 26 2007, 03:07 AM
- - Nintyuk   One second i hope you don't change mine too mu...   Sep 26 2007, 04:02 PM
- - Nod Strike   So what's changing with mine?   Sep 26 2007, 05:53 PM
- - Lightstorm   hey corsair what ever happened to that picture of ...   Sep 26 2007, 10:36 PM
|- - Corsair   I haven't worked on it since the last time we ...   Sep 27 2007, 01:11 AM
- - Lightstorm   just stick in one of Vintz A-10s, or an old orca, ...   Sep 27 2007, 01:27 AM
|- - Corsair   I could show you what I currently have if I haven...   Sep 27 2007, 01:41 AM
- - Lightstorm   sure PM it to me.   Sep 27 2007, 04:30 AM
- - CrashKing   QUOTE ("TB)I know a lot of people are putting...   Sep 27 2007, 02:03 PM
- - Omen   A perfect roleplay will be as impossible as a tota...   Sep 27 2007, 05:21 PM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Omen @ Sep 27 2007, 01:21 PM) A pe...   Sep 27 2007, 07:41 PM
- - Lightstorm   and we want to continue it so please try and hurry...   Sep 27 2007, 11:28 PM
- - Vintriaz   I like it lights, but it'll take me some time ...   Sep 28 2007, 12:28 AM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Vintriaz @ Sep 27 2007, 08:28 PM) ...   Sep 28 2007, 12:31 AM
- - Vintriaz   QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Sep 27 2007, 05:28 PM...   Sep 28 2007, 06:06 PM
- - Nintyuk   Beep Beep Beep Beep Beeeep BOOOM! ^im going ...   Sep 28 2007, 09:15 PM
- - Nod Strike   Let's do something to pass the time... explai...   Sep 29 2007, 07:24 AM
|- - Corsair   My guys are super elite WTFBBQ soldiers that like ...   Sep 29 2007, 05:54 PM
||- - Lightstorm   QUOTE (Corsair @ Sep 29 2007, 01:54 PM) M...   Sep 29 2007, 09:00 PM
|- - Nintyuk   QUOTE (Nod Strike @ Sep 29 2007, 08:24 AM...   Sep 29 2007, 06:07 PM
- - Team Black   well we haven't had a pilot yet who hasn't...   Sep 29 2007, 09:20 PM
- - Lightstorm   don't worry, Zen will be back in the air soon ...   Sep 29 2007, 09:37 PM
- - Nintyuk   short and sweet? ill try that Krissy/K.I.T.TY: A J...   Sep 29 2007, 10:54 PM
- - Team Black   I'm not changing the actual story, just how it...   Sep 30 2007, 12:15 AM
- - Lightstorm   I hope so I wanna add moar nao!!   Sep 30 2007, 12:43 AM
- - Team Black   OK I'm done editing for tonight, I'm going...   Sep 30 2007, 01:20 AM
- - Lightstorm   *shoots Team Black with laser for not unlocking it...   Sep 30 2007, 04:27 AM
- - Vintriaz   QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 29 2007, 06:15 PM...   Sep 30 2007, 06:26 AM
- - Nod Strike   I see numerous problems with the whole orca - A10 ...   Sep 30 2007, 06:33 AM
- - Nintyuk   QUOTE Having Krissy magically find documents that ...   Sep 30 2007, 09:41 AM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Nintyuk @ Sep 30 2007, 05:41 AM) I...   Sep 30 2007, 06:39 PM
- - Nintyuk   If Corsair agrees then i don't see any point i...   Sep 30 2007, 07:06 PM
- - Lightstorm   well personaly I thought that whole deal with you ...   Sep 30 2007, 07:09 PM
- - Nintyuk   It was Kinda confusing but my charachter was kinda...   Sep 30 2007, 07:21 PM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Nintyuk @ Sep 30 2007, 03:21 PM) I...   Sep 30 2007, 08:18 PM
- - Team Black   Ninty, I appreciate your imagination, but you need...   Sep 30 2007, 10:19 PM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 30 2007, 06:19 PM...   Oct 1 2007, 12:28 AM
- - Team Black   OK, a grunt infantry no one cares to know about   Oct 1 2007, 12:42 AM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 30 2007, 08:42 PM...   Oct 1 2007, 01:16 AM
- - Lightstorm   I can help Ninty if he needs and help, and if he d...   Oct 1 2007, 01:21 AM
- - Team Black   I don't want to speak for Ninty, i don't t...   Oct 1 2007, 02:01 AM
- - Lightstorm   I think I could help with it, I should be able to ...   Oct 1 2007, 02:18 AM
- - Nintyuk   Sorry I didn't mean to sound that way. I acted...   Oct 1 2007, 10:01 AM
- - Lightstorm   hey Ninty here is an idea: get firefox. it has a b...   Oct 1 2007, 01:32 PM
- - Team Black   Ninty, I'm 19 and in college, and have passd a...   Oct 1 2007, 02:16 PM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Team Black @ Oct 1 2007, 10:16 AM)...   Oct 2 2007, 12:58 AM
- - Lightstorm   like I said. give me a way to edit it it TB and I...   Oct 1 2007, 06:46 PM
- - Vintriaz   Well I took a look at what all had been modded wit...   Oct 3 2007, 12:42 AM
- - Nintyuk   NintyUK's MK.II charachter rewite As request...   Oct 3 2007, 04:21 PM
- - Team Black   Myself, I never liked the idea of a cat lady in th...   Oct 3 2007, 06:03 PM
- - Nintyuk   exscuse me team black? i said above any comments ...   Oct 3 2007, 06:28 PM
- - Lightstorm   personally TB I think Oxanna is not going to get h...   Oct 3 2007, 06:57 PM
- - Team Black   QUOTE (Roleplay @ 1st page)expect we're ...   Oct 3 2007, 09:57 PM
- - Lightstorm   I'd like to request taking over Ninty's ch...   Oct 4 2007, 12:00 AM
- - Team Black   Well you definitely have the 'believability...   Oct 4 2007, 12:39 AM
- - Lightstorm   well I do have a plan for the cat thing but if you...   Oct 4 2007, 01:01 AM
- - Team Black   If one thing has to go, it's the cat thing N...   Oct 4 2007, 03:32 AM
- - Nod Strike   If you make her a tank pilot, a lot of things will...   Oct 4 2007, 01:31 PM
- - Lightstorm   by the cat thing i meant the mutantness, not being...   Oct 4 2007, 01:49 PM
- - Team Black   They'd really need a good explanation though f...   Oct 4 2007, 02:16 PM
|- - Lightstorm   TB she's not visibly a mutant, from looking at...   Oct 4 2007, 06:55 PM
|- - Nintyuk   QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Oct 4 2007, 07:55 PM)...   Oct 4 2007, 07:15 PM
- - Nod Strike   Fine, make her a human, but don't make her a t...   Oct 4 2007, 02:29 PM
- - Nintyuk   Ok I’ve brainstormed a couple of possible ways o...   Oct 4 2007, 04:17 PM
- - Team Black   Well, it's an improvement. I appreciate your e...   Oct 4 2007, 07:56 PM
- - Nintyuk   you guys may or may not know but a lot of descussi...   Oct 4 2007, 08:16 PM
- - Team Black   topics merged   Oct 4 2007, 08:42 PM
- - Lightstorm   I'd not do that, its just cruel, maybe they ta...   Oct 4 2007, 09:27 PM
- - Team Black   I really want to avoid any "oh she has a spec...   Oct 4 2007, 09:52 PM
- - Lightstorm   what if they make her into a Cabal Siren, that pic...   Oct 4 2007, 10:11 PM
- - Team Black   I'd rather have her turn to a borg than raped....   Oct 5 2007, 02:26 PM
- - Lightstorm   maybe she was just a spy all along and Snazzicoff ...   Oct 5 2007, 03:54 PM
- - Team Black   Let's meet in the middle - howabout they still...   Oct 5 2007, 06:18 PM
- - Lightstorm   Shaw isn't an android, she's a cyborg whos...   Oct 5 2007, 06:45 PM
- - Team Black   MSN. now.   Oct 5 2007, 07:07 PM
|- - Corsair   Care to share anything about the new Krissy, Ninty...   Oct 6 2007, 01:14 AM
- - Lightstorm   the new Krissy is going to either: 1. be a spy 2. ...   Oct 6 2007, 01:24 AM
|- - Corsair   Well, I was going to say that she is a high rankin...   Oct 6 2007, 01:45 AM
- - Lightstorm   oh yeah that too. and TB I know its a ways off bu...   Oct 6 2007, 03:54 AM
- - Nod Strike   This is bloody confusing. Where did the kids com...   Oct 6 2007, 06:53 AM
|- - Corsair   QUOTE (Nod Strike @ Oct 6 2007, 02:53 AM)...   Oct 6 2007, 08:54 AM
- - Team Black   OK folks, Roleplay MK 2.5 is up & open again. ...   Oct 14 2007, 03:04 AM
- - Nintyuk   Team Black this is all from your point of view, ot...   Oct 15 2007, 09:37 PM
- - Lightstorm   not to make a big deal of it but I agree with Nint...   Oct 15 2007, 10:07 PM
- - Team Black   Narrow minded huh I don't suppose you've ...   Oct 15 2007, 10:28 PM
- - Lightstorm   facepalm seriously TB, your running this like t...   Oct 15 2007, 10:34 PM
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