Roleplay under construction, (merged with the Ninty topic) Options

[Team Black]

hey uh, where did the roleplay go?

Just like roleplay MKI, there's become a lot of chaos and disorientation in the roleplay.
It was bound to happen, I just want to put it back on track before it gets too far.
I've set it under 'hidden', since I can't edit posts while the topic is closed. So it's really still there, even though you can't see it (Corsair, you can still see it right?)

I'm doing some hardcore editing on it, on spelling & grammar, removing the ion storm, making the characters a little more believable & less overpowered, and rewording some sections to make more sense to the reader.
TBA some entries were so grammatically bad that I didn't even take the time to read them at first. That's a big NO for us as writers: what's the point of spending the time writing, if all our readers are scared away by run ons and, bad speling, and, too many comas, and cant none even, now wat the frik the stories abut.

I know not everyone has English as a first language, but the rule holds true if you know you're going to bomb the story, please don't write.
Reading it can be just as entertaining

I know a lot of people are putting a lot of time and effort into this RP - if no one reads our roleplay because it's filled with bad writing and a boring story, then all that work has gone to waste. I'm doing what I can to edit out the garbage, so that none of the good work goes to waste

[Lightstorm]

what if they make her into a Cabal Siren, that picture of the glowing unit we saw in the C&C3 concept art. I really don't wat to see Ninty's character have that done to her.
I figured the interesting thing they find would be that she has something different about her, they find her interesting for the same reason they kidnapped the children they did, something specific about their DNA structure or bloodtype.
maybe have...wait I've got it, what if she just betrays them? what if something awful happened to her, something that would make her hate GDI as much as any Nod loyalist.
that just means something really bad has to happen to her, maybe have Snazicoff try and rape her, she kills him in self defense, they stick her in the brig to await trial, one of the guards is a friend of Snazzicoff's he beats her up then tries to rape her, but she gets his gun and shoots him, they say she's a traitor and plan on having her killed. thats when the attack on the base starts. a shell hits the prison, a Nod soldier finds her and thinks she was a captured Nod soldier. in the dark and the snowstorm its impossible to tell otherwise. then when they finally realize she's GDI she tells them what happened and gives them lots of information on the base and weakpoints on the vehicles etc, in exchange for letting her fight for Nod,