Roleplay under construction, (merged with the Ninty topic) Options

[Team Black]

hey uh, where did the roleplay go?

Just like roleplay MKI, there's become a lot of chaos and disorientation in the roleplay.
It was bound to happen, I just want to put it back on track before it gets too far.
I've set it under 'hidden', since I can't edit posts while the topic is closed. So it's really still there, even though you can't see it (Corsair, you can still see it right?)

I'm doing some hardcore editing on it, on spelling & grammar, removing the ion storm, making the characters a little more believable & less overpowered, and rewording some sections to make more sense to the reader.
TBA some entries were so grammatically bad that I didn't even take the time to read them at first. That's a big NO for us as writers: what's the point of spending the time writing, if all our readers are scared away by run ons and, bad speling, and, too many comas, and cant none even, now wat the frik the stories abut.

I know not everyone has English as a first language, but the rule holds true if you know you're going to bomb the story, please don't write.
Reading it can be just as entertaining

I know a lot of people are putting a lot of time and effort into this RP - if no one reads our roleplay because it's filled with bad writing and a boring story, then all that work has gone to waste. I'm doing what I can to edit out the garbage, so that none of the good work goes to waste

[Team Black]

Vintriaz, I don't know what you hope to accomplish with your angry PMs, threats, and anger problems. If you want any part of this roleplay, you need to act respectable and respond to criticism in a mature way.
Or, simply make your own roleplay, where you can kill your characters however you want.

You can keep your reckless piloting if you want to, but your A-10's will be replaced with regular orcas. There's no way a squadron of classic planes would last to the second tib war with Kriassin's horrible leadership skills.
It's one thing to kill off members of your squad and it's perfectly OK, but you have to do it with some dignity, or else your story will suck. You don't just have them randomly go all out suicidal against a well balanced navy, and you don't just have them blow up randomly in the air.
It's not just improbable for an artillery shell to strike a critical hit on a jet - the chances are so remote, it shouldn't even be considered possible!
Even if you had a SAM hit it, it would be fine. You don't need to invent miracles in your story to make it good - keeping it down to earth & believable does just fine

I'm not trying to be offensive, I'm helping to improve the story.

Writing is an art, not everyone is good at it. If you know you're probably going to drop a wrecking ball onto the story, then please, be content to JUST READ IT and enjoy, and give any comments you feel so inclined to leave (in blue, of course )
If I edit any of your stuff, please don't feel offended. I'm just trying to keep everything working together as smoothly as possible OK

This post has been edited by Team Black: Sep 26 2007, 03:01 AM