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Sep 25 2007, 01:39 AM
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Core Defender

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QUOTE hey uh, where did the roleplay go? Just like roleplay MKI, there's become a lot of chaos and disorientation in the roleplay. It was bound to happen, I just want to put it back on track before it gets too far. I've set it under 'hidden', since I can't edit posts while the topic is closed. So it's really still there, even though you can't see it (Corsair, you can still see it right?) I'm doing some hardcore editing on it, on spelling & grammar, removing the ion storm, making the characters a little more believable & less overpowered, and rewording some sections to make more sense to the reader. TBA some entries were so grammatically bad that I didn't even take the time to read them at first. That's a big NO for us as writers: what's the point of spending the time writing, if all our readers are scared away by run ons and, bad speling, and, too many comas, and cant none even, now wat the frik the stories abut. I know not everyone has English as a first language, but the rule holds true if you know you're going to bomb the story, please don't write. Reading it can be just as entertaining I know a lot of people are putting a lot of time and effort into this RP - if no one reads our roleplay because it's filled with bad writing and a boring story, then all that work has gone to waste. I'm doing what I can to edit out the garbage, so that none of the good work goes to waste
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Sep 25 2007, 02:04 AM
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QUOTE I made the topic 'invisible' so I can keep it open & edit it without worrying about others coming and posting. It's all there, don't worry And even if it was deleted, I saved the html's for each page all on my own computer.
Anything more, you can ask in the topic, so that people with similar questions won't need to ask me something I've already answered  oh sorry just that I went to look at it during lunch break & it had disapeared. Even my hyperlink In my siggy dindn't work so I was kinda wondering. Thanks for the speed up (update.) thanks again TB. sorry for wasting your time. Well now I'll have to wait 'till the repairs are complete. I think i'll go work on one of my voxels for now..
I know that all of my text, color, & size scripting will give him a headache for sure. man, sucks to be the editor i think.
This post has been edited by Vintriaz: Sep 25 2007, 03:15 AM
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Team Black Roleplay under construction Sep 25 2007, 01:39 AM Lightstorm I'm hoping you don't twist the storyline t... Sep 25 2007, 01:50 AM Corsair QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 24 2007, 09:39 PM... Sep 25 2007, 04:15 AM Nod Strike QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 25 2007, 02:39 AM... Sep 25 2007, 03:03 PM Nintyuk aww come on, my charachter was really starting to ... Sep 25 2007, 05:07 PM Lightstorm firefox has a spell checker. Sep 25 2007, 08:21 PM Nintyuk QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Sep 25 2007, 09:21 PM... Sep 25 2007, 08:35 PM Team Black I'm going to fix your spelling and grammar thi... Sep 25 2007, 11:13 PM Vintriaz [Tasteless Comment Removed]
I should know better ... Sep 26 2007, 01:18 AM Lightstorm just in response to Vintz the fleet isn't what... Sep 26 2007, 01:47 AM Corsair QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Sep 25 2007, 09:47 PM... Sep 26 2007, 02:07 AM Vintriaz only five? hmm... I was under the ussumption that ... Sep 26 2007, 02:58 AM Team Black Vintriaz, I don't know what you hope to accomp... Sep 26 2007, 03:00 AM Vintriaz *sigh* My apologies Team black I'm just loosin... Sep 26 2007, 03:07 AM Nintyuk One second i hope you don't change mine too mu... Sep 26 2007, 04:02 PM Nod Strike So what's changing with mine? Sep 26 2007, 05:53 PM Lightstorm hey corsair what ever happened to that picture of ... Sep 26 2007, 10:36 PM Corsair I haven't worked on it since the last time we ... Sep 27 2007, 01:11 AM Lightstorm just stick in one of Vintz A-10s, or an old orca, ... Sep 27 2007, 01:27 AM Corsair I could show you what I currently have if I haven... Sep 27 2007, 01:41 AM Lightstorm sure PM it to me. Sep 27 2007, 04:30 AM CrashKing QUOTE ("TB)I know a lot of people are putting... Sep 27 2007, 02:03 PM Omen A perfect roleplay will be as impossible as a tota... Sep 27 2007, 05:21 PM Corsair QUOTE (Omen @ Sep 27 2007, 01:21 PM) A pe... Sep 27 2007, 07:41 PM Lightstorm and we want to continue it so please try and hurry... Sep 27 2007, 11:28 PM Vintriaz I like it lights, but it'll take me some time ... Sep 28 2007, 12:28 AM Corsair QUOTE (Vintriaz @ Sep 27 2007, 08:28 PM) ... Sep 28 2007, 12:31 AM Vintriaz QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Sep 27 2007, 05:28 PM... Sep 28 2007, 06:06 PM Nintyuk Beep Beep Beep Beep Beeeep BOOOM!
^im going ... Sep 28 2007, 09:15 PM Nod Strike Let's do something to pass the time...
explai... Sep 29 2007, 07:24 AM Corsair My guys are super elite WTFBBQ soldiers that like ... Sep 29 2007, 05:54 PM  Lightstorm QUOTE (Corsair @ Sep 29 2007, 01:54 PM) M... Sep 29 2007, 09:00 PM Nintyuk QUOTE (Nod Strike @ Sep 29 2007, 08:24 AM... Sep 29 2007, 06:07 PM Team Black well we haven't had a pilot yet who hasn't... Sep 29 2007, 09:20 PM Lightstorm don't worry, Zen will be back in the air soon ... Sep 29 2007, 09:37 PM Nintyuk short and sweet? ill try that
Krissy/K.I.T.TY: A J... Sep 29 2007, 10:54 PM Team Black I'm not changing the actual story, just how it... Sep 30 2007, 12:15 AM Lightstorm I hope so I wanna add moar nao!! Sep 30 2007, 12:43 AM Team Black OK I'm done editing for tonight, I'm going... Sep 30 2007, 01:20 AM Lightstorm *shoots Team Black with laser for not unlocking it... Sep 30 2007, 04:27 AM Vintriaz QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 29 2007, 06:15 PM... Sep 30 2007, 06:26 AM Nod Strike I see numerous problems with the whole orca - A10 ... Sep 30 2007, 06:33 AM Nintyuk QUOTE Having Krissy magically find documents that ... Sep 30 2007, 09:41 AM Corsair QUOTE (Nintyuk @ Sep 30 2007, 05:41 AM) I... Sep 30 2007, 06:39 PM Nintyuk If Corsair agrees then i don't see any point i... Sep 30 2007, 07:06 PM Lightstorm well personaly I thought that whole deal with you ... Sep 30 2007, 07:09 PM Nintyuk It was Kinda confusing but my charachter was kinda... Sep 30 2007, 07:21 PM Corsair QUOTE (Nintyuk @ Sep 30 2007, 03:21 PM) I... Sep 30 2007, 08:18 PM Team Black Ninty, I appreciate your imagination, but you need... Sep 30 2007, 10:19 PM Corsair QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 30 2007, 06:19 PM... Oct 1 2007, 12:28 AM Team Black OK, a grunt infantry no one cares to know about Oct 1 2007, 12:42 AM Corsair QUOTE (Team Black @ Sep 30 2007, 08:42 PM... Oct 1 2007, 01:16 AM Lightstorm I can help Ninty if he needs and help, and if he d... Oct 1 2007, 01:21 AM Team Black I don't want to speak for Ninty, i don't t... Oct 1 2007, 02:01 AM Lightstorm I think I could help with it, I should be able to ... Oct 1 2007, 02:18 AM Nintyuk Sorry I didn't mean to sound that way. I acted... Oct 1 2007, 10:01 AM Lightstorm hey Ninty here is an idea:
get firefox. it has a b... Oct 1 2007, 01:32 PM Team Black Ninty, I'm 19 and in college, and have passd a... Oct 1 2007, 02:16 PM Corsair QUOTE (Team Black @ Oct 1 2007, 10:16 AM)... Oct 2 2007, 12:58 AM Lightstorm like I said. give me a way to edit it it TB and I... Oct 1 2007, 06:46 PM Vintriaz Well I took a look at what all had been modded wit... Oct 3 2007, 12:42 AM Nintyuk NintyUK's MK.II charachter rewite
As request... Oct 3 2007, 04:21 PM Team Black Myself, I never liked the idea of a cat lady in th... Oct 3 2007, 06:03 PM Nintyuk exscuse me team black? i said above any comments ... Oct 3 2007, 06:28 PM Lightstorm personally TB I think Oxanna is not going to get h... Oct 3 2007, 06:57 PM Team Black QUOTE (Roleplay @ 1st page)expect we're ... Oct 3 2007, 09:57 PM Lightstorm I'd like to request taking over Ninty's ch... Oct 4 2007, 12:00 AM Team Black Well you definitely have the 'believability... Oct 4 2007, 12:39 AM Lightstorm well I do have a plan for the cat thing but if you... Oct 4 2007, 01:01 AM Team Black If one thing has to go, it's the cat thing
N... Oct 4 2007, 03:32 AM Nod Strike If you make her a tank pilot, a lot of things will... Oct 4 2007, 01:31 PM Lightstorm by the cat thing i meant the mutantness, not being... Oct 4 2007, 01:49 PM Team Black They'd really need a good explanation though f... Oct 4 2007, 02:16 PM Lightstorm TB she's not visibly a mutant, from looking at... Oct 4 2007, 06:55 PM  Nintyuk QUOTE (Lightstorm @ Oct 4 2007, 07:55 PM)... Oct 4 2007, 07:15 PM Nod Strike Fine, make her a human, but don't make her a t... Oct 4 2007, 02:29 PM Nintyuk Ok I’ve brainstormed a couple of possible ways o... Oct 4 2007, 04:17 PM Team Black Well, it's an improvement. I appreciate your e... Oct 4 2007, 07:56 PM Nintyuk you guys may or may not know but a lot of descussi... Oct 4 2007, 08:16 PM Team Black topics merged Oct 4 2007, 08:42 PM Lightstorm I'd not do that, its just cruel, maybe they ta... Oct 4 2007, 09:27 PM Team Black I really want to avoid any "oh she has a spec... Oct 4 2007, 09:52 PM Lightstorm what if they make her into a Cabal Siren, that pic... Oct 4 2007, 10:11 PM Team Black I'd rather have her turn to a borg than raped.... Oct 5 2007, 02:26 PM Lightstorm maybe she was just a spy all along and Snazzicoff ... Oct 5 2007, 03:54 PM Team Black Let's meet in the middle - howabout they still... Oct 5 2007, 06:18 PM Lightstorm Shaw isn't an android, she's a cyborg whos... Oct 5 2007, 06:45 PM Team Black MSN. now. Oct 5 2007, 07:07 PM Corsair Care to share anything about the new Krissy, Ninty... Oct 6 2007, 01:14 AM Lightstorm the new Krissy is going to either:
1. be a spy
2. ... Oct 6 2007, 01:24 AM Corsair Well, I was going to say that she is a high rankin... Oct 6 2007, 01:45 AM Lightstorm oh yeah that too.
and TB I know its a ways off bu... Oct 6 2007, 03:54 AM Nod Strike This is bloody confusing.
Where did the kids com... Oct 6 2007, 06:53 AM Corsair QUOTE (Nod Strike @ Oct 6 2007, 02:53 AM)... Oct 6 2007, 08:54 AM Team Black OK folks, Roleplay MK 2.5 is up & open again. ... Oct 14 2007, 03:04 AM Nintyuk Team Black this is all from your point of view, ot... Oct 15 2007, 09:37 PM Lightstorm not to make a big deal of it but I agree with Nint... Oct 15 2007, 10:07 PM Team Black Narrow minded huh
I don't suppose you've ... Oct 15 2007, 10:28 PM Lightstorm facepalm
seriously TB, your running this like t... Oct 15 2007, 10:34 PM
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