okay i tried it out from top going to do bottom...please stand by. for the most part its good. the balance seems good although the bottom has much less defense. also the building in parts of the map seem too crowded and uniform. red areas are areas where buildings are bad, green is where they are good. it seems simple enough to change, just take out a bunch of the wrecked foundations, add a few more damaged but still-standing buildings and you'll be set.
the story is good, class 5 unit=MK-2 maybe?

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the bottom player doesn't have enough space to build a base, the top player can expand throughout the intact part of the city and still be protected but the bottom has to go beyond this to build. also the bottom base needs a better ground texture, I'd go for the one thats used by the rivers edge. the top base is too far from the initial tiberium it should be moved closer and lastly the neutral units circled in blue are too tough, i would either make them not stars or remove them because the AI has trouble dealing with them.
as for the rain it might be hardcoded or it might be scripted so you can't have it without also having the huge airbattle overhead. (which would be cool though)
This post has been edited by Lightstorm: Jun 1 2007, 11:48 PM