FS - mutated river (2) Options

[Crash]

Made a two player map, all I'll say is "ENJOY!"
Very basic, hope for good critizm!
EDIT:: Added V2 with some fixed stuff, added two bridge houses.

This post has been edited by Crash-King: May 18 2007, 12:23 PM

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[Ixith]

ok i looked at it in finalsun last night. ill try to play it ingame sometime later.

but heres what i noticed:

-detail looks good.
-good placement of tiberium mold and veins i think.
-IMO you could place some more tiberium around the molds though.....although that kinda is my style so i can see if you think differently
-i did find 1 cliff error that isnt outside the map area. its to the right of the bottom left tib field and to the left of the river there. its at a place where a cliff goes to a cliff ramps thing. so its a connector piece. nothing big. just noticed it figured id tell ya. sorry i cant get a pic.
-also did you use auto-shore on this map? cause there are several hints that tell me you did. 1 being that there is 2 cells of water in the very bottom right hand corner. BTW check your shores. i think there may be an error. not sure yet though ill check into it more later today.
-layout is good i think. however i think there should be more options on crossing that river rather than just a single bridge.

it looks like a good map. ill try to play it and give you more feedback soon.