[TS] Wilderness [2], finally uploaded Options

[Dudeinabox]

Okay it's finally uploaded folks!

Features a working train and moving traffic.

Feast your eyes:







This post has been edited by Team Black: Oct 27 2007, 02:44 AM

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[SeekSomethingNew]

Very Nice! Try and move away from making straight cliffs, just randomly place different angles, makes it look so much better

[Crash]

There we go, awesome moderating job!

Today's joke. I'll look at the map now or later today and give a review. Seems good from the pics though, but I see some repeated and straight cliffs...

Here we go..

Detail: 5\10 - You need to detail places better, it's quite boring at the moment.
Layout: 6\10 - I like it. But your straight and repeated cliffs drag down two points.
Balance: 10\10 - Can't see any issues.
Lighting: 5\10 - Ouch, you gotta edit light posts.. check out the lighting tutorial for help. It looks a bit boring too.
Overall: 6,5\10 - A map that could use more work, get marble madness, make less straight cliffs. The cities are nice.
You can easily improve yourself. Detail more, edit lightposts and add a more custom lighting, make errorfree non straight, non repeated cliffs, and you've got a very nice map!

Marble madness

This post has been edited by CrashKing: Oct 27 2007, 10:05 PM

[Dudeinabox]

Cheers guys, thanks for the feedback and improvement comments and such, to be honest with the lighting I had no idea what I was doing so I just put in a few numbers and I was happy. also never really noticed the straight cliffs, but I guess that'll come with some experience eh?

-DIAB

[azri_apoc]

anyway, nice map there. but i think you need to add some more light post, it looks bit dark on some area.

This post has been edited by azri_apoc: Oct 28 2007, 06:43 AM