tiberium warzone, my 3RD attempt on making a map Options

[Warlord]

okay i gave it another go but OMG 3 goes at it and i impressed no one :(
i hope this one is good enough though not finished yet








is it good?

[Tore]

the water looks blocky thats all i can say its room for much improvement

my current rating (negative)

[Ixith]

this one looks better than your other 2 so far. however it could like always use improvement.

i notice that you are attempting to add in the Scrin ship......and well ill tell you this it aint that easy to do correctly. but good luck with it.
also looking at the minimap i see your water and it looks blocky. i would change that.

now my biggest thing to comment on has nothing to do with the map itself really but its about the way you seem to work. you seem to get discouraged quickly when we tell you it needs improvement while its in the WIP stage and then you seem to quickly finish that one up and try to implement our advice into your next maps. which is ok i guess. but i think you should fix your maps based off of our comments while they are still in their WIP stage.

another thing is you seem too eager to finish a map. which is bad as you want to take as much time as possible with them so you know you get in a lot of detail and stuff in it.

one suggestion i have for you. take a good look at the spotlighted maps and see just how detailed they are and how the people detailed them and then see if you can find their corresponding WIP thread and see how long it took them to be made. youll see that most if not all have taken at least a week if not longer.

[Warlord]

well im not quitting this one because i think its really good i fixed the water blocky thing you said